UPDATED on The Future of Trunks

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Hi Everybody :)

I apologize for taking a bit of an unintentional break for a couple months. Just needed to recharge. I want you to know that while I've been kinda quiet, I re-read the entire Future of Trunks to fix/tweak/edit things. I feel I've done as much as I already could. Certain details are not quite as elaborate and defined as I would like them to be, others I love.

I'd like to ask you guys now, if you could let me know of certain things that didn't make sense or things you would like to have gotten a better picture of. This can be how a certain setting looks in your head or could be why a character behaved or said something in a certain way.

I would love any input at all that you might have to give to help me improve the story. I still owe 2 drawings from my last journal entry (that I have every intention of fulfilling), but I would like to offer another sketch from my book to anyone who has some advice for me.

Thank you all again so much for reading, I hope to hear from you! :heart:
Rider~
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NeoKenshi's avatar
I have loved the character of Trunks since I was 11 (I'm 24 now). Your story is truly amazing, and I felt like I had come full circle after reading it. Your characters are amazing and you capture Trunks PERFECTLY. If you get this published I will be there to definitely buy it. I honestly have to thank you for writing this(I'm sorry I'm totally gushing but its seriously life changing, especially if you've felt a connection to the character the way I do(which is evident that you do)). I could go on for hours about how good your story is lol.
Truly an amazing read and thank you again.