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Hey all
I'm putting up this journal for the purposes of receiving some detailed feedback about my story. I appreciate that you've left your comments very vague so as not to reveal spoilers, but here you may talk about whatever you wish! What you like, what you don't like either in story or my style of writing, and also things you hope to see happen. I'd love to hear what you have to say. It's true I'm writing this mostly for me, but I'm open to adapting certain elements so as to appeal to more people. (I don't really consider that pandering, more/so trying to understand what people enjoy so as to improve the overall quality.) I'm coming closer to finishing, so I want this thing nice and shiny when complete! I also want to give a special thank you to everyone who has stuck with me for so long. I understand I'm taking forever to finish, but I promise it will be worth it. Any Dragonball Z fan will approve with how this story comes to an end.
Much appreciation,
Rider~
Been a while! (The Future of Trunks UPDATED)
Hi folks,
I haven't updated anything since earlier this year, but Volume XI is finally available. I have one more volume to finalize before I put it up.
I apologize for not uploading anything lately but I have a good excuse... My husband and I are having a baby :) I'm due in a month so wish us luck :thumbsup: I still come on regularly just to check things but yeah I haven't been able to produce much artwork lately.
Quick shout out and thank you to my new readers, you guys encourage me to keep up with my story! Much appreciated, if you ever have any questions feel free to send me a note. I love talking with you guys! :heart:
Rider4Z
Storage Issue to Resolve
Hello everyone,
Thanks for your patience and support. My copyright issue has been resolved so I will slowly start taking my pieces out of storage. This incident has inspired me to take a look at my account and I'm going to make some changes to organize things better.
As of right now, the only piece I made available is the read file of THE FUTURE OF TRUNKS, but only the first volume. This is because I have been going through the entire story again trying to flesh out the characters more and add a bit more depth to the story. I've never had any training in writing so I'm learning as I go. And I realized some important things seem to be missin
Temporary Deviation Storage
Hi everybody!
I'm currently having a legal issue with a couple of my deviations. I'm consulting with an attorney about the matter and he suggested I hide all my other pieces so the other party won't have the option of going fishing while we deal with this matter.
I also want you to know that I am currently going through The Future of Trunks very thoroughly and polishing a lot of things. I'm not much of a reader so writing an actual book is more/less over my head. There are a lot of techniques I'm not aware of because I've never studied writing, but I feel like I'm learning simple but effective execution on my own... or at least I hope so.
The Future of Trunks UPDATED
Hey all, from time to time I update what I've written. I don't have an editor so I try to go back and catch mistakes, and even rework or reword some stuff that doesn't sit well with me anymore. Nothing too major ever changes, it's usually the little things that ended up meaning a lot that I go over and touch up.
If you're in the middle of reading, please update your file with the current one. And if you've read thru it already, I ask that you replace your copy with this one, just in case you choose to re-read again :)
Thanks a lot for all your input and comments, both on this and on my artwork. They really mean a lot to me :heart:
~Rider4Z
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It may be a small request but I do want to see Trunks transform into a Super Saiyan 2. That would just be fantastic! 